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risa ([personal profile] hyojungss) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2025-01-04 06:37 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] an almost palpable ache

JESS YOU ARE CRAZY!!!! i've missed your writing but you haven't missed a beat... "It made something unexpected and hot rear up in her gut. Believe it, she wanted to scream. She chose you!" the female jealousy is soooo good throughout all of this! i love the contrasts between jc (the uniforms) and seungkwan's barbed way of support (Seungkwan was actually going to kill her if she didn’t tell Seungcheol today, but Jeonghan would take a ritual execution at this point.), and the emotional support spoon T___T

i love how this is written and structured, with the flashback being such a turning point, and jeonghan's thought process interspersed with the exposition about their relationship. saur saur good... <3 so many delicious lines!!

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