hwa this was great!! i love how the narrative is told symbolically through minghao and wonwoo's dialogue (and the discussion of rain) as well as the exposition and junhui only really shows up at the end when what the whole story is about is going to happen.

Minghao would rather not think about the beginning, as he sat here thinking about the end. beautiful.... love how you've written minghao reflecting over the relationship, it is sad but you as a reader resign yourself to the same opinion as minghao: it wasn't meant to be.

not to discount wonwoo has a character either because you give him a lot of life. Maybe it was nothing, but for Wonwoo, words and actions found it difficult to escape the gravity of his conscience. So the silence was something. i like his supporting role and the broader context of their friendship trio adding another layer to what it means to break up... minghao is such a logical and emotional person at the same time so it is so interesting to read his thoughts. thank you <3