HWARIUM!!!! I'm sitting in this cafe with a big stupid smile on my face thinking about Minghao as the kind of person who will always do right by his heart. (--and sorry to quote first from your note rather than the fic but! your brain!!) This is so atmospheric and liminal, from the train station to the coming rain. The whole time Minghao is waiting. It's not until the very end that we see Junhui at all, when Minghao has already decided to end things. I love the central questions of this story--what is a love story? how do you know if someone is yours to keep? what do you do if they're NOT? Just perfect philosophy for this trifecta.
Maybe it was nothing, but for Wonwoo, words and actions found it difficult to escape the gravity of his conscience. So the silence was something. -- HELLO JEON WONWOO CHARACTERIZATION OF ALL TIME. I will be turning this phrasing over again and again in my mind it is so rich. The mentions of other svts (specter of Yoon Jeonghan we will never escape you) (Soonyoung and Seungkwan not meant to be) (YANAN) are delicious.
The concept was like water in a room, and Minghao had just placed his hand on the door knob, and felt the force behind it. This line hit like a punch. I /felt/ this with my whole body. It would've been easy to make this comparison with a glass aquarium, or some other structure that's meant to have water in it, but. Water in a room with a door knob. Water flooded where it's definitely not supposed to be. That slight feeling of wrong-ness, of dread, just colored the phrase so beautifully for me.
Thank you so much for this I am kicking my feet and thinking furiously and hehehe-ing at my little computer screen, 17HOLS IS BACK BABEY
Re: [FILL] 始终有限
Maybe it was nothing, but for Wonwoo, words and actions found it difficult to escape the gravity of his conscience. So the silence was something. -- HELLO JEON WONWOO CHARACTERIZATION OF ALL TIME. I will be turning this phrasing over again and again in my mind it is so rich. The mentions of other svts (specter of Yoon Jeonghan we will never escape you) (Soonyoung and Seungkwan not meant to be) (YANAN) are delicious.
The concept was like water in a room, and Minghao had just placed his hand on the door knob, and felt the force behind it. This line hit like a punch. I /felt/ this with my whole body. It would've been easy to make this comparison with a glass aquarium, or some other structure that's meant to have water in it, but. Water in a room with a door knob. Water flooded where it's definitely not supposed to be. That slight feeling of wrong-ness, of dread, just colored the phrase so beautifully for me.
Thank you so much for this I am kicking my feet and thinking furiously and hehehe-ing at my little computer screen, 17HOLS IS BACK BABEY