screaming! crying! rolling around in bed kicking the sheets loose, etc etc!
I wrote the fill thinking that I could finally do something for you since you've filled a number of my prompts but it seems that you have gotten me once again T____T the scales will never be balanced at this rate.
one of the things I appreciate and admire about your writing is how adept you are at creating tension-filled atmospheres! it's like. when Joshua held his breath, so did I. when he struggled against his desires for Jeonghan, I struggled with him. particularly obsessed with this section:
“Darling,” Jeonghan says softly, hands tight on Joshua’s body. “Call the light—I want to see you—”
“No,” Joshua interrupts. “No light.”
because!!! you can hide in the dark, but the light reveals so much!! Joshua wants to deny the truth so badly that he is willing to forsake his essence. it's so sick. SICK AND REAL. (pun intended). plus the fact that he almost slipped and called Jeonghan by name...the more you try to control it the more your desires control you.....
um if you see me remixing the remix, just know that you've toppled me over the edge of the cliff. <3
Re: [REMIX] want.
I wrote the fill thinking that I could finally do something for you since you've filled a number of my prompts but it seems that you have gotten me once again T____T the scales will never be balanced at this rate.
one of the things I appreciate and admire about your writing is how adept you are at creating tension-filled atmospheres! it's like. when Joshua held his breath, so did I. when he struggled against his desires for Jeonghan, I struggled with him. particularly obsessed with this section:
“Darling,” Jeonghan says softly, hands tight on Joshua’s body. “Call the light—I want to see you—”
“No,” Joshua interrupts. “No light.”
because!!! you can hide in the dark, but the light reveals so much!! Joshua wants to deny the truth so badly that he is willing to forsake his essence. it's so sick. SICK AND REAL. (pun intended). plus the fact that he almost slipped and called Jeonghan by name...the more you try to control it the more your desires control you.....
um if you see me remixing the remix, just know that you've toppled me over the edge of the cliff. <3