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karina ([personal profile] sunwalkr) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-12-31 02:55 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] But nothing is like the heart of a person

ki… i feel like everything i say is just an echo of what has been said before but. you are simply so cool. i cannot believe i get to sit here and read your minwon (!!!!!!!) and experience all of the emotions that you have just fed through us. i feel like i have been through the shredder and back… your writing is simply one of the most raw and aching and tender i have ever had the pleasure of reading; your dialogue is also one of my most favorite things ever, it’s always like a punch to the gut (
“Because I was lonely,” Mingyu said. “Because you made me feel lonely even though I knew you loved me. I thought I could live with it at first. But I guess I wasn’t as strong as I figured.”) GAWD

mingyu’s sadness feels pitched and keening but in the end it’s also wonwoo’s desperation at the end (“but I want you to know that I would have really liked running through the rain with you. More than anything in the world.”) there is just so much hurt and loneliness between them two portrayed in a way that didn’t let me tear my eyes away from as they hurtled to the end. you my friend are an artist. i hope you are doing well

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