This was such an enjoyable read! I loved how you established their situation and the way you show Joshua's changing perspective.

They share a cigarette outside the restaurant, leaned up against a planter. Joshua can’t stop thinking about indirect kisses—such a stupid, childish concept. He tries to keep his lips as much off the filter as he can, but every time he brings it back to his mouth it’s cold, wet from Seungcheol’s spit.

I thought this was such a good and interesting image!