i have already told you how much i love this but let me tell you again because this is GREAT!! it's so funny and so charming, and it's such a sweet and playful depiction of the best kind of drunkenness, and how it can lower those initial barriers and bring two people closer together.

I absolutely loveddd seungcheol's inner monologue, he's the stupidest dumbest boy ever I adore him!!! but also the way you showed the slow progression of him becoming more fond of jihyo and more attracted to her... and how much of that came from him *noticing* little things about her... idk it's just so genuine and true to life, this is how most people fall in love, not because of some big intense moment but just an accumulation of fondness and affection for someone!!! idk it just feels so youthful and fun and hopeful, all the best parts of young love and the early stages of dating and regardless of whether they get together romantically this was a cute flirty moment for them and that's valuable in and of itself for them!!! ahhh idk why I have SUCH feelings for this but I think we see so much intensity in fic when it comes to falling for someone that it's actually soooo nice to see the fun and lighthearted side of it too :)

also your dialogue is SO snappy and excellent as always and a big big big part of why this piece feels so airy and happy. also x2 nayeon + jeonghan need to get together and scheme and argue more. in case it wasn't clear i loveddd this