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chickenfrog ([personal profile] chickenfrog) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-12-30 03:33 pm (UTC)

Re: All nature in confusion

HELLO sorry i'm late!! but gosh op, this flattened me like a pancake T______T i should have been prepared for the hurt based on the vibes of the quote and my own prompt lol but i rly wasn't! this made my heart ache so much (in the perfect way)!!

it's really cool that you wrote from minghao's pov/the perspective of the person drifting away... i couldn't help holding my breath while waiting for the bomb to drop for poor mingyu ;; in particular, these lines really knocked me out:
> The thing about mirrors is that they reflect your own myopia.
> How do two people know that they’re looking at the same color, just because they both give it the same name?
> He stopped himself, deflated, the words momentarily stunned by the unfamiliar rush of free fall, wings still damp with amniotic fluid.

all very wow and owww at the same time ;; i also loved the bits of the other members that you sprinkled in, like vern's stock options (lol) and possible tensions between 8jun... thank you for breaking my heart with this one hahaha

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