furniished: yang kuei-mei in vive l'amour lying on a mattress on the phone (Default)
jun ([personal profile] furniished) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-12-29 04:30 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] swipe

wah I love the premise of this so much, the trenches of modern dating through the joshhong pov - it's so perfect, especially his vague passivity but also not wanting to "settle" (hmm!) and I really liked the shift in tone of What if he could try being someone else tonight?
I enjoyed all the little details throughout, like the cafe-hopping tactic and the damp shared cigarette - the story feels so real even with just a single scene. Thank you for sharing!!

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