ALLY this is a delight! First of all you open the game with Jeonghan maybe-cheating which just goes to show the whole fic is about to be perfect. And:

“Yeah!” Soonyoung yells back. He pumps one fist in the air. “Yeah, I’m gonna! Hyung, I’m gonna do it!” —WHY IS THIS SO HOSHY I’m just

feeling wild with something that he cannot name, something that fizzles all the way down to his fingers and toes. —i love this line!

And the kiss! Lol what a thrilling fic! Love this you are so talented!!!