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lachrymosy ([personal profile] lachrymosy) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-12-28 02:41 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] succession of shelters

I loved this. The feelings were so clearly communicated, and each scene contained so much great characterization. I loved these lines especially:

he doesn’t think the city loves him in the way he loves the city, but he is part of it, now, and that’s something. it has to be something. he begs for it to be something.

That feeling of needing somewhere to belong but the things that anchor you are changing… so good!

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