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ally ([personal profile] arundels) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-12-27 10:49 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] i wanna see you (but you're not mine)

I feel insane this is beautiful and so full of emotion, and the way you used the mug to depict the timey-wimeyness of time and memory... so good. I'm on my phone so can't copy lines properly but the bit where soonyoung tries to throw the mug away and wonwoo stops him, I gasped. Gorgeous writing!! And the imagery of clean lines versus the misshapen mug to depict the wonhan contrast. It's all so good thank you for sharing this with us!!

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