ellie your mind your MIND. first of all the opening sentence is chilling and sets up the world so well. and then you continue to develop this war-stricken setting as a backdrop to Mingyu's relentless kindness. Mingyu lifts him up anyway, and carries him away. that's mingyu THAT'S MINGYU !!! it makes the reveal of his tragic backstory even more poignant because he's been through so much and still he loves STILL HE LOVES
the dialogue between gyuhao then builds the connection between them so deftly and efficiently. “I don’t have anyone,” / “You have me now.” OKAY!!! Then "I hate them all" / “Most of them are just following orders,” I'LL JUST DIE THEN!!!! minghao's “I’ll stay with you to the end.” HOLY SHIT
minghao saying “You’re not done yet,” then CATCHING THE FIRE like holy hell you're so cool minghao you're soooo cooooool,,, and the use of myungho / minghao you're so clever you're SO CLEVER
Minghao, a demon in the night, burns bright. - pulling it back to mingyu referring to the soldier who killed his mom as a demon oh NOOOOOOOOO ellie this is so excellent I'm shaking
Re: [FILL] burn it down
the dialogue between gyuhao then builds the connection between them so deftly and efficiently. “I don’t have anyone,” / “You have me now.” OKAY!!! Then "I hate them all" / “Most of them are just following orders,” I'LL JUST DIE THEN!!!! minghao's “I’ll stay with you to the end.” HOLY SHIT
minghao saying “You’re not done yet,” then CATCHING THE FIRE like holy hell you're so cool minghao you're soooo cooooool,,, and the use of myungho / minghao you're so clever you're SO CLEVER
Minghao, a demon in the night, burns bright. - pulling it back to mingyu referring to the soldier who killed his mom as a demon oh NOOOOOOOOO ellie this is so excellent I'm shaking