Argh this is so memorable... This version of a canon dynamic is FASCINATING and you wrote it so well. First of all, "I'm doing something more important." is TERRIBLE but it also sets up this version of yjh so well lol. The gyuhan phone call was so well-written—jeonghan's feelings are set up so clearly! And Seungkwan's!
And "You gonna go?" Seungkwan hears it now. The odd lilt of his own voice. omg this line really hurt for some reason.
Jeonghan going through his list was a really fascinating addition to this fic; I don't think it would be the same without it because I feel like part of the point of this fic is Seungkwan trying to figure out where he fits, if he fits, what he feels and what he deserves. His jealousy but also his admiration and insecurity are implied but not stated, here and in other scenes, which I think was so well done.
Idk I really love this and this horrible version of idolverse and would 100% read more
Re: [FILL] less lonely together
Argh this is so memorable... This version of a canon dynamic is FASCINATING and you wrote it so well. First of all, "I'm doing something more important." is TERRIBLE but it also sets up this version of yjh so well lol. The gyuhan phone call was so well-written—jeonghan's feelings are set up so clearly! And Seungkwan's!
And "You gonna go?" Seungkwan hears it now. The odd lilt of his own voice. omg this line really hurt for some reason.
Jeonghan going through his list was a really fascinating addition to this fic; I don't think it would be the same without it because I feel like part of the point of this fic is Seungkwan trying to figure out where he fits, if he fits, what he feels and what he deserves. His jealousy but also his admiration and insecurity are implied but not stated, here and in other scenes, which I think was so well done.
Idk I really love this and this horrible version of idolverse and would 100% read more