hello i am simultaneously going to combust from this and turn into stardust ejected from space........... i just GODDDDD have such a thing for all this and... thank you for the food first of all and this paired so incredibly nicely with karina's fill.... TT again!!!! i am incoherent!!!!!!!
your words somehow hang so interestingly (fragmented) (and i mean this in a Positive Way) through this work and really tie up the entire feel of what you were trying to portray... things like (Sentiment, lingering. Jihoon's never been the type to let things go quickly. Split him open like an egg and find that golden-yolk center, that love so tender.) is so brilliant to me...
i always have a soft spot for certain lines i read in fic and that is going to be there... the idea of Lingering is so powerful....... wow. the emotions!!!!!!! are Feeling. wild.
you expanded the egg metaphor so brilliantly. so brilliant so PACKED.... in a way that makes it have... more depth. i just want to hang this on my wall and worship the pure wit behind all the different metaphors. this changed me and so wonderfully so pleasantly im running out of adverbs and adjectives the state of my incoherency is as usual apparent oh man. ohhhhh Man.
i think ive always had a Thing for enlistment fic because of it as an entire process, because of the fact that i am a peculiarly positive person—from the preparation to the sendoff to the reunion it all contains aspects that can be so sweet and so looked into.. and you did just that with this wonderful continuation. thank you so much really... i treasure this all a lot
Re: [REMIX] sunny side up
your words somehow hang so interestingly (fragmented) (and i mean this in a Positive Way) through this work and really tie up the entire feel of what you were trying to portray... things like (Sentiment, lingering. Jihoon's never been the type to let things go quickly. Split him open like an egg and find that golden-yolk center, that love so tender.) is so brilliant to me...
i always have a soft spot for certain lines i read in fic and that is going to be there... the idea of Lingering is so powerful....... wow. the emotions!!!!!!! are Feeling. wild.
you expanded the egg metaphor so brilliantly. so brilliant so PACKED.... in a way that makes it have... more depth. i just want to hang this on my wall and worship the pure wit behind all the different metaphors. this changed me and so wonderfully so pleasantly im running out of adverbs and adjectives the state of my incoherency is as usual apparent oh man. ohhhhh Man.
i think ive always had a Thing for enlistment fic because of it as an entire process, because of the fact that i am a peculiarly positive person—from the preparation to the sendoff to the reunion it all contains aspects that can be so sweet and so looked into.. and you did just that with this wonderful continuation. thank you so much really... i treasure this all a lot