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karina ([personal profile] sunwalkr) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2022-12-26 09:47 am (UTC)

Re: [REMIX] sunny side up

u already know how i screamed when i got the notif / realized that this had gotten remixed already and then read the epigraph + first paragraph and screamed some more because did you know that was also a passage i was considering quoting ???? we rly do share similar views on love & when it comes to writing it & every bit of this gutted me so well ;;; i am super grateful to u for picking this up to remix

i have legit shoved my face into my hands im smiling so brightly…

Here is the pearl-cautious center of him. The part of him that loves them but still wraps his wounds in silence.

Soonyoung comes back in two months time. Seokmin ten after. Jihoon's anticipation is so bright it hurts to look at.
the motif of brightness and warmth throughout this piece was just so!!!!! YEAH!!!!!! jihoon has this tendency to be quiet but really when you look at him he’s so loud in the actions he performs (his yearning, his laughs, the tendency to cling, acts of service) he is like a little pearl… im going to incorporate this into every version of him i write now thanks for that

oh and when he thinks maybe jeongcheol had stopped by to clean the apartment and stock the fridge T___T CRYING theres no greater act of love i think… plus this paragraph that speaks so well on jihoon’s character/feelings as a whole:
Sentiment, lingering. Jihoon's never been the type to let things go quickly. Split him open like an egg and find that golden-yolk center, that love so tender.


he is so good here i’m so proud of him for trying. they’ll be there soon little guy!!!!! be brave!!!!!

thank u so much for writing. its perfect. and exactly what i envisioned for these three.

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