sorry but. where do I even begin with this one? how could I even begin when you've ended me? you know what you did, didn't you? again, with making me chuckle at the cough additional tags. Yoon Jeonghan being there feels like an inside joke.
the opening!!!! gets me all tensed in the right ways - maybe I'm as easy as Mingyu with Wonwoo when it comes to your writing. whatever. I'll plead guilty. just the anticipation of it all... not knowing when the wave would finally break, only to have the punch delivered straight to my gut here: [...] Wonwoo doesn’t care if it’s fucked up—all he can think about is the intensity of that very first time Jeonghan kissed him. ARGUHHHGUGHHHH you're insane. I'm insane. I love this wonwoo so much. I kiss your brain. like. It surprises him to realise how much he wants to be the only one to ever find out. GOD!!!!
I don't even :) want to go into :) the next scene. idk. I want to know what goes on inside their heads. the acknowledgement that there's someone else in the bed with them even when they're alone. uuuum. and also [...] when all this while the only thing he could do was listen in. my brain is mush......
and of course. the last two sentences are just! genius! then again, you are genius. enough so that I shall thank you for ruining my life.
Re: [REMIX] if i can't have you, no one should
again, with making me chuckle at the cough additional tags. Yoon Jeonghan being there feels like an inside joke.
the opening!!!! gets me all tensed in the right ways - maybe I'm as easy as Mingyu with Wonwoo when it comes to your writing. whatever. I'll plead guilty. just the anticipation of it all... not knowing when the wave would finally break, only to have the punch delivered straight to my gut here: [...] Wonwoo doesn’t care if it’s fucked up—all he can think about is the intensity of that very first time Jeonghan kissed him. ARGUHHHGUGHHHH you're insane. I'm insane. I love this wonwoo so much. I kiss your brain. like. It surprises him to realise how much he wants to be the only one to ever find out. GOD!!!!
I don't even :) want to go into :) the next scene. idk. I want to know what goes on inside their heads. the acknowledgement that there's someone else in the bed with them even when they're alone. uuuum. and also [...] when all this while the only thing he could do was listen in. my brain is mush......
and of course. the last two sentences are just! genius! then again, you are genius. enough so that I shall thank you for ruining my life.