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replaydebut ([personal profile] replaydebut) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-02-14 05:12 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] you wanna ____ me right now

RRRRRHHHHHHHHHH

okay first of all lol…when I saw you post this on twt I nearly screamed bc I highly doubted anyone would see my vision and want to fill this deranged prompt…I’m so happy…I love these insane horny freaks. I just…really resonate w the way you write jeonghan in general. His guarded emotional state that he’s secretly ashamed of and the way he like…uses other people’s vulnerabilities against them (not always in such cruel ways as this fic, but…he sees people’s intentions and desires so plainly while always concealing his own..) which is sooooo rhrjdmdnfjdhhd especially in a gyuhan context bc of how…shall we say desperate mingyu always is about everything (especially approval). Anyway aahggdjdjg I love this so much the adrenaline the fear, danger, their banter, THE END WHEN MINGYU PUTS THE GUN IN HIS MOUTH HAHHGGHD I DIED AT THAT IMAGE TBH ! It feels like the only moment in the fic when jeonghan actually gets what he wants from mingyu and lets himself give in to it. ALSO THIS LINE: Jeonghan’s face fixes into a deceptive calm that masks the bubbling rage inside of him. There are ways better than physical threats to retrain a dog.

My brain is mush:) thank you for writing this it was such a treat and pleasant surprise to read today

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