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lachrymosy ([personal profile] lachrymosy) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-12 04:07 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL]: we still have a long way to go

Oh, I really enjoyed reading this! I could not have envisioned this interpretation of the prompt but I love it. I love how you took the Hot mv and started fleshing out a world around it and the little hints of what is going on beyond this moment. And then the storyline here hurts so much! I thought it was so compelling how Jeonghan is trying to be a brat, the suggestion that he's doing it to alleviate Chan's fears and distract them both—it's just really painful and interesting and I loved reading it <3

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