furniished: wjsn exy in green shirt standing at a railing (exy)
jun ([personal profile] furniished) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-11 03:11 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] too funny to laugh about

i really like how you paint a picture of jun here that's partially through wonwoo's eyes - not really sure if he's interpreting things correctly, given jun's opacity - but at the same time provides the reader enough information to be like, PLEASE just kiss already... "don't sit where you shit" is such a good ellieism (use of [mis]translation/effective and slightly dad-coded humor). i keep fixating on jun cutting the conversation short by suddenly asking if he's going back inside out of nowhere T_T hang in there jww...

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