furniished: japanese breakfast (michelle zauner) lying down surrounded by persimmons (jbrekkie)
jun ([personal profile] furniished) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-08 11:51 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] late night talking

LET'S GOOOOOOOO THANK U FOR THIS DELICIOUS FOOD
i love this progression from jihan can you please just be normal for once without doing this insane dance around what you WANT to the most tender but understated moment (ofc jeonghan is drunk and joshu is just down the worst but. we take what we can get). IT'S BEEN TWO DAYS.

i like how you fit so much backstory into these scenes and give really effective glimpses into their dynamic/history together. "He’d let Jeonghan pretend, though." can be something soooo love language... but ESPECIALLY when it comes to jeonghan... i also think it's so cool how you sort of flipped the pov of the prompt like.. joshua IS lonely but jeonghan is the one who misses him enough to call!

i'm so happy you took on this fill AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE SEBTINS FROM YOUUUU

p.s. joshua hong who does not appreciate unexpected phone calls... that's capricorn representation babiee

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