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harbourdreams ([personal profile] harbourdreams) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-06 07:01 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] do you think i'm a loser?

I love this a lot, thank you so much for writing it! Oh jeonghan…what are we going to do with you. I love that he’s still so himself, even though he’s slipped a little further down the loser spectrum than he probably wants to be, and i like to think shua sees him that way too. That kind of “how i see me vs. how they see me” is something i was really excited for ppl to portray with this prompt, and i like how you conveyed that in a way that was both rich and subtle. Like, the palpable tension, the awe vs. self-consciousness of when they’re talking to each other…delicious. I also appreciated the little cameos from other members. Of course boo and gyu are the ones who insist on staying at-least-kind-of-friends. And poor soonhee, she’s just trying to be nice but has no idea what’s going on around her. This was a really great read, thanks again for writing it!

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