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risa ([personal profile] hyojungss) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-06 12:59 am (UTC)

Re: [FILL] so we could call it even

if i loved this less i could talk more coherently about it... jeonghan talking like she was the only one he knew at this event he was at as if he didn't dress up and go to the event just for her... imagining jeonghan texting her incessantly to get her to respond, pretending he didn't know what he did... the way she doesn't want anyone else she knows to see him lmfao ... nayoung extreme defense/antivulnerability mechanisms!!! omg your jeonghan pov is so effective with that in mind. (i think i might have said this in the comment of sentimentalist but idt i could ever write jeonghan pov so i admire it even more from you) they are soooooooo the way it reads like jeonghan feels entitled to her but it doesn't feel like that because you know nayoung only doesn't reciprocate until the end because she's deeply repressed. THE WAY THEY DON'T TRUST EACH OTHER LOL!!!

did jeonghan set up nayoung with seungcheol just to hear her say she wasn't interested and admit her actual feelings for jh..... we're always so cruel to csc ♡ the risapphy staple...

i also love that yjh says he'd take that risk for someone that wasn't nayoung because i think he knows the repercussions of being the only one would be worse because he l*kes her that much. you portray the want between them soooo well.. thank you for this delicious treat!!!

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