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klav ([personal profile] klav) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-05 12:19 am (UTC)

Re: [REMIX] break my heart for what breaks yours

GYUHANCHEOL MCD LOVE CONGA LINE!!?

It is so cool how you handled the remix - it felt like layering, with the addition of seungcheol + references to whole other lives and stories that complement the original plot and characters. You both did such a great job with the fantasy world-building. Mingyu looked over, it’s one of the court dancers, Minghao. Something in his chest flutters, like a warm breeze, but then his mind whirls back to Jeonghan, Jeonghan. you know this made me go bananas hahahah. A hint of gyuhao which might've once been possible but has since been smothered by jeonghan's meddling triangulation crimes? DELICIOUS. The allusions to a Circe-esque jeongcheol backstory are super enticing too... selfishly I am hoping there are more and more remixes in this universe. Entranced!Mingyu's POV was one of my favorite parts. It's so jarring to feel his detachment toward his previous life... also of course Mingyu's heart soars. He's a good boy, Jeonghan said so! The puppy-isms!! Yes!!

Excited always to read your writing. Thank you for sharing this!!

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