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lachrymosy ([personal profile] lachrymosy) wrote in [community profile] 17hols 2023-01-04 01:47 pm (UTC)

Re: [FILL] so we could call it even

Okay, so 1) do I have to look up a picture of Nayoung every time you post a fic that includes her? Yes. 2) Will I willingly do this every time you post a fic about her? YES. This was such a good read! I love the way you write their dynamic with neither one willing to cede the ground it would take to get what they probably want but are afraid of. This is such a good bit of imagery to introduce their relationship here: She’s wearing the navy slip dress under her gown that Jeonghan remembers hooking off her shoulders at his apartment a week ago while his mouth sucked a mark over her clavicle.—you're so good at writing really memorable images like this! In the same vein I absolutely love the ending scene and their conversation; idk how to express it all at the moment but I will probably shout at you about this months later because I will still be thinking about it!

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